Moonrise, Chapter 5: Breaking Point

[bcrebel]

August 2010

The sun rises slowly over a rural town somewhere in Colorado. The shadows cast by the small cluster of businesses and stores shift as the sunlight moves across them and small slivers of the morning sunshine filter their way into a dirty and enclosed alleyway.

As the light gets brighter and shapes within the alley become more

Comments

[dreamupfalldown]

Aww Poor Demi, she's smart enough to realize that 'whatever' is inside her can harm Selena and that's real sweet and all but COME ON! It's SELENA hahaha you can't leave her again, :P

Oh and I'm sooo curious to see when those werewolf hunters(?) are gunna come more into play, this is definitely heating up the plot.

oh just an fyi when you were talking bout the dead deer, you spelled it dear, xD

Love this!

[aubztastik]

Jesus.

Firstly, throughout this chapter, I had the lyrics so the song Monster by Skillet running through my head. Describes Demi's inner struggle so much.

Secondly, how do you manage to take my heart, rip it up, and still put it back in my chest without killing me?!

[bcrebel]

I wish I could make videos. I would totally make a video of Demi and Selena set to Animal I Have Become by Three Days Grace (I hadn't realized until like just now how completely similar those songs are, and not just lyrically).

Things will get better, I promise! (although I can't promise there won't be more getting worse before they do, or after or, you know, during). I'm also handing you another flashback next time to give everyone a better idea of where this is going. I think I've got 4-5 chapters left + an epilogue of sorts, or a final chapter set during the following summer, same thing really I guess.