Been a while...

[bdale88]

It's been a while since I've posted anything, so here's a story I wrote when I got bored and tired but didn't feel like going to sleep

Comments

[rockinyorwrld]

::tear:: oh matt..finish the story please!

[anonymous]

wow...
-alysia

[fine_eyes118]

But why does he have to leave? It makes me so sad...

[jinmako]

Matthew Matthew.
Enthralling perhaps. Beautiful indeed.
Its all good in description of emotions.
the flow and coherence is superb.
the ending and the draft*
you should make it more abrupt, it is just laid there as an item, not a threat* which what i believe you were trying to build to. please tell me if i am mistaken

[bdale88]

lol I just got really tired and wanted to go to sleep... so you're basically right. I just pulled that out of my bum to be honest.