Re: Fic: lost inside this forest (1/1, R for sex)chimeriquesAugust 5 2012, 23:34:33 UTC
AHHH!! You! You filled my prompt!! You filled my deathless prompt!! WITH SOMETHING FROM THE SMALL ACTS OF KINDNESS 'VERSE?! Dear god this is fantastic. I honestly am all flail right now, but I seriously feel like Natasha and Clint can be molded to fit the Deathless story so wonderfully, or, even better, Deathless can be molded to fit them. I loved this sooo much.
Re: Fic: lost inside this forest (1/1, R for sex)chimeriquesAugust 6 2012, 03:41:43 UTC
Okay I'm back to say I am in love with your use of denial, or specifically, the phrase "he/she will not be denied" especially with the influence on red, and then obviously Natasha's hair...after all red compels. :)
Oh my god, and I don't know if you meant to do this, but when Clint asked Natasha to finish the story someday...just the implications of that, since their story is so similar, and its end is so sad...at least in this verse I'm just...IDK FEELS.
Re: Watch out--I'm about to meta all over you.sugar_feyAugust 6 2012, 02:16:50 UTC
*wipes meta stains off shirt*
I'm glad you think this is hot! You know it's the most explicit thing I've written? :P
And they barely made it through the door. The neighbours were lucky they didn't get a free show in the hall (or would that be unlucky?).
(and yes, I'm still tempted to write a 5+1 of their reunions in this verse b/c of that image alone.)
*says nothing* *sends enabling vibes*
They never sy the words (like not ever, not in my head, they just don't do that) but their confessions of love are always around--they crop up in every one of their little rituals: the storytelling, a kiss on her the wrist, tracing his scars, worshipping her body, give and take, push and pull.This! They declare their love through actions but never words, and they get the message anyway because they've never needed words to communicate
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I SEE YOUR META AND RAISE YOU MOAR META.workerbee73August 6 2012, 03:23:23 UTC
Is it really the most explicit? Moreso than last one?
And yes, definitely hot. And I will take hot by implication every damn day of the week. Don't tell me everything; don't even come close. Just imply enough to plant a couple of lovely ideas in my head and we're good. Srsly. That's the secret. (at least to me)
I imagine he has a ritual for her as well, but I can't think what that is right now. Thoughts?
**ponders**
Hmmm.... with him it wouldn't be about words.
I think it's all about water. He literally washes the dirt and dust and blood of the mission off of her. Sometimes it gets all hot 'n heavy, sometimes it's more worshipful or platonic, but he literally washes the past away. Brings her back to herself. The water is scalding hot, there's maybe one candle in the room (sometimes it's almost completely dark), and he knows, he just knows when they're done by the way her breathing changes-- the way she starts to come back to herself. The spell is lifted and the princess wakes back up. (plus I have all these images of him washing
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Re: I SEE YOUR META AND RAISE YOU MOAR META.cybermathwitchAugust 6 2012, 03:33:43 UTC
I think it's all about water. He literally washes the dirt and dust and blood of the mission off of her. Sometimes it gets all hot 'n heavy, sometimes it's more worshipful or platonic, but he literally washes the past away. Brings her back to herself. The water is scalding hot, there's maybe one candle in the room (sometimes it's almost completely dark), and he knows, he just knows when they're done by the way her breathing changes-- the way she starts to come back to herself. The spell is lifted and the princess wakes back up. (plus I have all these images of him washing her long red hair b/c clearly i need to add hair!issues to my long list of cronenburg!issues.)
Re: I SEE YOUR META AND RAISE YOU MOAR META.sugar_feyAugust 6 2012, 03:33:45 UTC
The other one was probably more explicit, now that I come to think of it. I guess by explicit I actually meant 'sexiest.'
OMG, yes to everything. I can see that so clearly. Especially him washing the blood out of her hair. (I thought hair!issues was already a thing in this fandom? :P)
Re: I SEE YOUR META AND RAISE YOU MOAR META.chimeriquesAugust 6 2012, 03:45:39 UTC
Goddddddd. That washing the blood/dust off of her.......HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE THINGS?!? They are made of gold and sparkles and everything perfect. Idek what I'm saying. But I'm starved for a fic about this.
lost inside this forest“There’s a story about a princess who chained a king in her basement ( ... )
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This prompt was too good to pass up. Deathless does fit them so well!
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Oh my god, and I don't know if you meant to do this, but when Clint asked Natasha to finish the story someday...just the implications of that, since their story is so similar, and its end is so sad...at least in this verse I'm just...IDK FEELS.
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I'm glad you think this is hot! You know it's the most explicit thing I've written? :P
And they barely made it through the door. The neighbours were lucky they didn't get a free show in the hall (or would that be unlucky?).
(and yes, I'm still tempted to write a 5+1 of their reunions in this verse b/c of that image alone.)
*says nothing* *sends enabling vibes*
They never sy the words (like not ever, not in my head, they just don't do that) but their confessions of love are always around--they crop up in every one of their little rituals: the storytelling, a kiss on her the wrist, tracing his scars, worshipping her body, give and take, push and pull.This! They declare their love through actions but never words, and they get the message anyway because they've never needed words to communicate ( ... )
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And yes, definitely hot. And I will take hot by implication every damn day of the week. Don't tell me everything; don't even come close. Just imply enough to plant a couple of lovely ideas in my head and we're good. Srsly. That's the secret. (at least to me)
I imagine he has a ritual for her as well, but I can't think what that is right now. Thoughts?
**ponders**
Hmmm.... with him it wouldn't be about words.
I think it's all about water. He literally washes the dirt and dust and blood of the mission off of her. Sometimes it gets all hot 'n heavy, sometimes it's more worshipful or platonic, but he literally washes the past away. Brings her back to herself. The water is scalding hot, there's maybe one candle in the room (sometimes it's almost completely dark), and he knows, he just knows when they're done by the way her breathing changes-- the way she starts to come back to herself. The spell is lifted and the princess wakes back up. (plus I have all these images of him washing ( ... )
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It's amazing what can come from a sleep-deprived brain. IDEK. **shakes head**
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OMG, yes to everything. I can see that so clearly. Especially him washing the blood out of her hair. (I thought hair!issues was already a thing in this fandom? :P)
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And thank you. :)
My brain. Sometimes I don't even know. O_o
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