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[workerbee73]

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Fill: You're Still You, H/C, PG-13

[nightswhisper]

He’s staring out the window when she walks in. She hadn’t been told anything, though she could have easily slipped his chart from the attendant. She didn’t need to read a medical report. He didn’t need to speak a word. She noticed it immediately

Re: Fill: You're Still You, H/C, PG-13

[inkvoices]

Ooo, interesting look through Natasha's eyes! I like the idea that Clint wouldn't want to say anything when he can't hear what he's saying and Natasha thinking that giving Clint that huge hug at the end 'embarrassing' if it was a permenant thing. Also tht she doesn't see the need to speak if Clint can't hear her, matching herself to him.

The smile he offered was anything but hopeful. She considered it a challenge. She was good a challenges. I love how determind Natasha is and that they way this paragraph sits could mean that she considers making him smile a challenge, making him hope a challenge, or making it work a challenge.

Re: Fill: You're Still You, H/C, PG-13

[nightswhisper]

I think you're far too insightful! Too be honest I completely did not intend the ambiguity at the end, but I'm really glad I did something like that! Haha. You made me out to be better than I am.

Thank you so much for your feedback. I hope you enjoyed!

Re: Fill: You're Still You, H/C, PG-13

[jacedesbff]

Clint Barton didn’t have much. What he did have, what he valued, he shielded with his life.

THIS.