Primeval Fic: Not Alright

Mar 01, 2011 00:44

Title: Not Alright
Author: bea_tricks  
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Abby/Connor, Lester
Words: yes.  it's one of those stories with words.
Rating: M (I was initially planning on T, but Connor got very insistent)
Summary: For the first time, Abby could understand how Helen could have gone as mad as she had. Living in the past was a challenge, but coming ( Read more... )

primeval, fanfic

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prehistoriccat March 1 2011, 08:59:57 UTC
*meep* Poor Abby, I think you've really hit the nail on the head with her, she is very broken and not mending because she won't admit to herself that the time in the Cretaceous affected her more than she thought. I think Connor's broken too, and instead of them sitting down and talking to each other, they're just trying to cope. One of them snap *sniff*

I love that Connor and Lester are taking care of her in this. Great story

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fredbassett March 1 2011, 10:44:23 UTC
That was a fabulously believable look at Abby's reactions.

I loved that analogy of having left something behind her that she hadn't had the chance to retrieve.

This whole story really worked for me.

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mysteriousaliwz March 1 2011, 11:34:24 UTC
*hugs Abby*

Poor girl, I can see how she wouldn't want to admit to needing help.

Excellent story.

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not_from_stars March 1 2011, 13:12:08 UTC
I loved this and I love how Connor and Lester are determined to take care of her even when she can't admit something is wrong.

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casy_dee March 1 2011, 15:24:25 UTC
Truly lovely... I think this is a good look into Abby's head. Poor thing.

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