Checkmate 'Verse: Body Language: Interpretive Dance

[beadattitude]

Title: Body Language: Interpretive Dance
Series: Checkmate 'VerseAuthor: Beadattitude

Comments

[ladycat777]

And about twenty minutes after that, Rodney's eyes watered while he tried not to laugh at John's tiny kitty snores. It might wake him up.

This whole thing - you, this verse, everything - is beyond adorable, but that line? That line made me glee outloud!

(Glee is apparently a wordless sort of ee! sound. I think cats have a better version.)

[beadattitude]

::snorgles you:: GLEEEE. I changed it up a little bit, see what you think, there, at the end. It didn't feel quite finished. And now I HAVE to go to the chriopractor, my goodness. Procrastination, thy name is Bead.

(but omg, I finally wrote something,omg!)

[ladycat777]

Oo, I like! Normally I am against tinkering, because when I tinker it leads to massive badness, and if it's where your instinct had you end things, that instinct is probably right. And the line is still adorable and could be a fine ending - but this one is good too :)

Go! Chiropractor! Believe me, I understand the importance of magic fingers!

[lavvyan]

*melts with glee*

[djaddict]

Awww! Kitty snores - how sweet!

I love kitty!John soooooo much!

[djaddict]

And I love the addition at the end! Sweet!

[beadattitude]

Oh, good!

[lapislaz]

My Moondust kitty not only snores, but talks in her sleep. Really.