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[beaker_rocks]

As the sun sets
It carries all my threats
Gone for a night
Everything is all right
But then they come back
Coming to attack
I thought they were done
As well as the sun
I say,"Why can't they go?"
But they respond, "NO! NO! NO!"
Wishing they would flee
Only to just depress me
Can not wait for the sun to go down
As I get dressed into my sleeping gown

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nice

[silverdragon05]

kid, this is awesome, mebbe you should become a poet...wouldn't hurt ya...might pay better than a musician's job too, just kidding....hmm, mebbe you could become a poetry reading musician...interesting thought. well, keep up the good work, and don't stop writing, i did once, and it's never been the same. you're good, keep it up.