my story thus far

[beantowngrlie]

ok...since there was some interest, im posting my story as it stands right now. not done....just what i have so far. the last chapter is really raw and unedited. i just needed to get it done. if you have time, check it out....let me know what you think. and if you know of a song i can use at the end of the last one, let me know. so...here

Comments

[anonymous]

Kimmy, I love it...keep it coming! Talk about pressure...I'll be bugging you for more! I'm trying to think of a song for you at the end, give you some ideas...I'm still thinking. I'll let you know. I never knew what a talented writer you are!!...it's easy to read and you can def sympathize with the main character. Keep it coming young lady!

Melissa

[beantowngrlie]

thank you my dear....oh man....now im actually going to have to keep this up at a regular pace. i wrote most of it in july/august....ill put some work into it over the weekend...maybe there will be more then

[politicalfemme9]

I can't think of a specific song, but I think that it should be a song that is significant to Alex's past. A song that reminds her of her childhood, and a song that she later learns that is significant to her birth-mother as well. I don't know. Something to tie it all together. Everyone loves a theme song.

[beantowngrlie]

hmmm.....good call...i was thinking maybe complicated...cause her life has gone from zero to complicated in the matter of days....ill look at it tomorrow...