Orange Collision

[macca44552]

Title: Orange Collision

Pairings: John/Paul, George/Ringo   Equal time for both pairings
Rating: NC-17

Warnings: sexual situations, drug and alcohol use, language, distressing situations

Summary: En route to Los Angeles, a storm diverts the Beatles to an uncharted island in the middle of the Pacific. Finding themselves among the few survivors,

Comments

[tssktssktssk]

LOL such a good chapter until Jessica went kooky, and then it got god again until George started being an angsty little girl.
JOJ YOU CAN'T HIDE WHAT'S INSIDE.

wooh short comments

[tssktssktssk]

what the hell.
*good
not god
the fuck

[macca44552]

JOJ. JOJ. JOJ. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL. *DIES*

That is best name for George ever. I think I love you. XD

[tssktssktssk]

THAT'S HOW GEORGE IS PRONOUNCED IN SCOUSE. IT MAKES SENSE YOU SEE.
<3

Re: AWESOME!!!!!

[macca44552]

You shall get moar!!

[sundarlingxx]

Loved this (as always aha)

Update soon?? :D

<3

[macca44552]

Thank you! :D

Yep, yep! I promise to update soon.

<3333

[fuszigi]

OMG, you're back. Thank you! Gonna read it within a minute. <3

[macca44552]

Haha, yeah! School's over! almost

[fuszigi]

Uh sorry, it took me more than a minute, but now I can write you a proper comment. :)

It's amazing that apart from writing about the typical relationships between The Beatles, you can also smuggle in that story some other problems, important or not... And you do it always, I found it in every story. :) It's great, I really love it. The way you wrote here about this "inside" and "outside", it was so true and great. Ringo seems to be the only one who really thinks about getting out off the island. I wonder how they'll manage to escape! And how are going to end this story. Hope it's not gonna end very soon? :D
I've almost forgotten how much I love your fan fiction. And how I am addicted to it. Keep writing! <3

Mine school's already over xD

[macca44552]

a;sdkfjal;fj Wow, thank you for this comment! XD I love how insightful it is. *hugs* Well, I always feel like there's so much more going on apart from teh sex, and if I don't include it I feel like the story's... missing something. If that makes sense. XD But I'm so glad that you appreciate the detail that I'm putting into it!

For now, Ringo is the only one who's thinking about the people on the outside. I suspect that'll change eventually though. XD And, yeah, this story's not going to end very soon.

Lucky, haha! XD I only have one more final until I'm freeeeee.

<33333

[windywisp]

Awesome! Love it! Can't wait for more! 8DDD

[macca44552]

Awww, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!