Orange Collision

[macca44552]

Title: Orange Collision

Pairings: John/Paul, George/Ringo   Equal time for both pairings
Rating: NC-17

Warnings: sexual situations, drug and alcohol use, language, distressing situations

Summary: En route to Los Angeles, a storm diverts the Beatles to an uncharted island in the middle of the Pacific. Finding themselves among the few survivors,

Comments

[alexxis3]

Iiiiiiihihihihihi! :D
I looove this story so much and this chapter was aaaawsome! Nice with some J/P love ;D I'm loving the hot scene behind the plane when Paul "cheated" XD Hot and hilarious!

And Paul McKinky eh? I think this calls for a new...oh, hi there new icon :3

[macca44552]

I LOVE YOU. NEW ICON. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU. WHY HAVEN'T WE GOTTEN MARRIED YET?

*breathes* But yeah, I'm glad you enjoyed the J/P sexytimes. More are on the way!

[alexxis3]

YES, WHY HAVEN'T WE!? :O

Hehe :) I'm looking forward to a new chapter!
And it's fun making icons like this, it's much more fun when they fit to a story than to only make icons of random pictures of the boys. Even if I could stare at their faces all day long... *happy sigh*

[lennon_jok]

god fucking dammit. some of the best stuff i've ever read. did you know em or somethin'?!

“That’s because you lot don’t know how to use it properly! You’re supposed to squeeze from the bottom, not from the middle,” Paul said, demonstrating his brilliant ways with the tube of paste, “So I have to fix that and some of it squirts out and I end up putting the rest on my toothbrush.”
yup. yep, so paul.

“I still don’t know why I’m not allowed to run,” Ringo frowned, intentionally making it exaggerated and comical.
nailed ringo.

John pictured him running up the finish line, his dick wagging around, poor Ringo crying at the sight.
fuck me, did i laugh!

:)

[macca44552]

*blushes until I die* Wow, thank you!

Haha, the toothpaste comment was a last minute edit, but I had to put it in there because it seemed like just the sort of thing that Paul would say. XD

Thanks again for this comment! I can't even tell you how happy it made me!

[sundarlingxx]

YAY! Aha I loooove this story so much! xD

I'm pretty sure I died of laughter when John said they should have a sex den aha

Can't wait for the next update! Soon please?

Xx

[macca44552]

I looooooooove you so much. >:D

Haha, happy to make you laugh! More is on the way soon. I'm trying to update more frequently so I can have a sufficient amount of the story finished before I have to start uni again in the fall.

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[macca44552]

As soon as I have time, I want to draw John and Paul in their athletic get-ups!!!!!

Really? s;djfa;lfjs Oh man, I am so excited! 8D

We all love John's meanness. It's what makes him endearing.

Glad you're enjoying top!Paul as much as I am! >:D

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[blackbirdfan]

Dang, I hope we get to read the rest of what happens in their little love den.

You do John/Paul banter like nobody's business. Hilarious chapter.

And this gave me an especially good laugh: "Fuck Ringo for suggesting that they do this without shoes. As soon as he finished this fucking thing he was going to grab his shoe and beat Ringo to death with it."

[macca44552]

Haha, well there will be plenty more sexy love den shenanigans to come!

Aw, thank you! Sometimes their banter is hard to write (they are so witty, gah), so it's nice to know that I can pull it off competently!

If I were in John's position, I would have been thinking the same thing. XD

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