I'm sorry if this seems rude. You've done a great job of getting the base of her personality down! Beato is more then just an lol troll and you've pulled that off well :) She's generous to those who are kind to her. But, something seems lacking - especially in her threads with Battler. I think the thing to keep in mind is that Beatrice is more like a spoiled child then anything else. She's usually very energetic and playful to those around her. She's not quite the casual speaker, either. You did a great job in having her react the way she did when Battler rejected her. But it feels like some of her motives are missing, as well. I'm no sure what canon point you are playing her from - but I think Episode 5 and 6 would be a huge help for you. She's a hard character to nail, and it takes a lot of energy to get her right, so I do look forward to seeing you continue to play her more.
No it's not rude at all! Thank you very much for your comment, really. I'm aware myself that something feels off when I've been playing her at Siren's Pull and I've been trying to fix her a bit so she feels right, if that makes any sense. I played her at a different community before and felt like I had a much better grasp on her voice than I do here so I guess I'm still trying to change that so it's reflected here
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Hello! I've been reading over your Beatrice for quite some time and I thought I'd just leave some concerns here. I honestly think you do have part of her personality down, which is a start. She's a difficult character to understand and extremely complex. But, that's the problem. You only seem to have the outshell of her personality down, when there's much more to her than that. You don't seem to have a handle on her motives, which may be your problem. Beato's motives come from the fact that she is to wait for a promise for Battler to fulfill and maybe be loved by him. While this isn't stated until later on in canon, this information has been translated and released by witch hunt for some time now
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First off, thank you for the crit Anon! I'm glad you pointed out a few of these things cause I've been feeling up and down with the way I play Beatrice sometimes
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The plot with Grell and Beatrice has only been mentioned on Plurk, poorly mentioned even, not really described in detail at all or anything of the sort since well...it's plurk and is usually 3AM. First off Beatrice is not simply going to do it out of boredom and of course she has a reason. In fact, it's not even her who will be doing the killing - Grell will. All she's doing is using him as a pawn and creating closed rooms for the most part. Beatrice, thanks to Battler's most recent disappearance has been left feeling bitter, quite bitter, and since she promised she'd play a game with Battler once again (now that he was Game Master) what she originally had planned was to punish and fuck with him - take the Island and turn it into a Gameboard for the two of them
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TL;DR the plot is something that both myself and Grell mun will be going through in greater detail together, but I personally think one should wait before they crit someone on a plot they don't know all of the details about/have their source inquire about it even more. Even what I wrote above isn't the whole plot, simply because I'm feeling long winded and like I said, details are still being worked out. Just be rest assured it's not simply because Beatrice is bored and wants to off some people. It's not
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