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Mar 31, 2005 07:39

FIVE TIMES

Five times today she passed that mirror,
five whole times.
Five times she thought to herself
why aren’t I Devine.
Five times she shed a tear,
for all the pain inside.
Five times she said out loud,
it will happen in time.
But those five times were only more,
to add to the days before.
Because five days from now,
she will be no more.

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_nicotine_nails March 31 2005, 03:46:32 UTC
I definately dig.

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beautiful__boys March 31 2005, 03:52:34 UTC
thank you!

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dorks_are_sexy March 31 2005, 03:46:45 UTC
Hey Chelsey! thats really good, it sorta reminded me of a few things i have written.<333

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ps____iloveu March 31 2005, 03:53:34 UTC
u have like a gift to writing. after reading some of the poems u have writen in later times u really good. and i really like this one. its abviously igift i DONT have saddly. :[ but w.e i like it!

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beautiful__boys March 31 2005, 04:03:52 UTC
whos lj is this??
sry im probly stupid and know you really well and just forgot
but please tell me!

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ps____iloveu March 31 2005, 04:06:11 UTC
hillary lol

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poetry_pimp March 31 2005, 03:56:08 UTC
wow chelsey that was really good..
love love lveo u

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beautiful__boys March 31 2005, 03:58:37 UTC
thanks *grins teeth!*

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no___vacancy March 31 2005, 03:56:42 UTC
gnome face that was amazing you get a gold star for cooperation :] and talent.

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beautiful__boys March 31 2005, 03:57:50 UTC
haha thank you mr ogar

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