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beautiful_ori

fic: Caught [intro]

Jul 16, 2006 23:45

Title:Caught
Pairing(s):Will Turner/Davy Jones
Author: Beautiful_Ori
Rating: NC-17 overall, first part PG
Warnings: Non-con/rape and tentacles, obviously.&&SPOILERS!
Disclaimer:Don't own, not being paid, this is pure fiction.
Summary: Will gets busted.[short, lame summary is for folks that may not have seen the film yet.]
( Well now, if it isn't wee little Turner! )

Comments 10

kay_koneko July 17 2006, 12:40:00 UTC

cool! ^_^ was wondering when someone would do a Davey/Will (even if it is non-con). It just seemed so set up when he sneaked in there for the key. Good job! Keep writing!

puremalevolence July 17 2006, 15:41:48 UTC

Rawr, more. I love Will rape fics. I'm so evil XD.

emcee_mana July 17 2006, 16:57:15 UTC

Don't worry, me too. There's something about the way he'd squirm.. ^^

justawench July 17 2006, 15:44:02 UTC

Yay for angst! Am waiting anxiously for more.

emcee_mana July 17 2006, 16:58:24 UTC

Is this open to a little critique?

beautiful_ori July 20 2006, 07:42:34 UTC

um...sure...if you want.

But first you should know that this little thing was written mainly, if not wholly for fun, and therefore I don't take it too seriously. I just wanted to write it, I didn't plan it out or anything like that. In my opinion, my other stories are much better.

So if you want to critique that's fine, but you should email it to me [ yourmomsonfire@comcast.net ] because I have lots of accounts and the one connected to this LJ isn't one I check very often. If you're just going to yell at me and flame, you might as well not because I'll basically just laugh and then delete the mail.

BTW, who is Xanthias, if you don't mind me asking?

emcee_mana July 20 2006, 16:17:37 UTC

Xanthias is a character from the play The Frogs, whom Roger Bart played alongside Nathan Lane.

I'm no flamer. I am loving the fact that Davy has tentacles.. ^^ And the only way I love to see Will is on his back, non-con.

yxonomei July 20 2006, 20:51:55 UTC

Can I just say I love tentacles and tentacle-rape? I've been waiting forever for good tentacle!fic. Wonderful job!