A non-Harry Potter fic

[restlesswolves]

Ok, this fic was based on a conversation my friend and I were having today. The reason why I spend more time on the actual characters than I do the actual "getting it on" is because it's based on two of my friends (unbeknownst to them...0_o* teehee)

I was just wondering if you could review it and give me some constructive criticism. This is the

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[alexi_lupin]

Oh, I loved that.

I too know boys like that, and you feel like going "Oh, just SHAG already!"

[restlesswolves]

we were sitting in chorus and in order to get more comfortable in the confining, straight-backed choral chairs, mark slipped his arm over the back of andy's chair and onto his shoulders. my friends and i were wildly intriuged. they really would be so cute together...;)

aren't there always those guys? "You're not fooling anyone, you know." *love it!*

[alexi_lupin]

Two guys in my Geography class were passing notes, and the teacher goes "Are you guys passing love notes or something?" And they both went the funniest shade of red...