Person of Interest fic: Swimming in Secrets, Reese/Finch, rated R

[beautybecks]

Title: Swimming in Secrets
Fandom: Person of Interest
Pairing: Reese/Finch
Rating: R for Reese’s arousal
Summary: Written for the commentfic prompt “Where does Finch go every Tuesday?”
Wordcount: 1800
Author’s Notes: First fic for the fandom, and I’m still not sure how it turned out. I wish I could have made it more porny, but the banter got the best of

Comments

[beautybecks]

Harold has that effect on me. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[db01_french]

Totally looooooove it~!
Will you write the sequel of this chapter? <3

[beautybecks]

Probably not. I mostly do one shots, but I'll probably be writing more PoI oneshots in the future. So glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting. And I can't stop staring at your icon. *blushes*

[managerie]

It’s hard to imagine Harold without his glasses, but it would be one less barrier between them, one less thing for Harold to hide behind.
Yes. Good observation.

clutching onto Finch as though he was a lifejacket and John was on the verge on drowning.
Very nice wih the swimming theme.

I’m not comfortable with your erection digging into my hip.”

*Snort* You get used to it…lol

For some reason, you seem to be determined to smash through them. I see no harm in showing you a door.”

Lovely Finch voice here and nice metaphor.

Some corrections:

had gathered the Harold Finch puzzle

I think it should be

had gathered of the Harold Finch puzzle

also

walls that I’m quite not sure how to break down

should be

walls that I’m not quite sure how to break down

[beautybecks]

Thank you SO much. I posted this at a time of night and month (NaNoWriMo) where words are starting to blur together. Literally.

Thank you for reading and thank you even more for the constructive criticism.

[managerie]

Oh, you are very welcomed.

I enjoyed reading this and I like to help.

[kmmerc]

LOL - I was going to recommend managerie as a possible beta for you, beautybecks! Looks like she's already started!

[latemorningicon]

this is so... yummy. and gorgeous. and beautiul writing :) loved this <3