In Another Castle

Mar 31, 2014 19:28

         You awake in the morning, the alarm clock softly demanding your continued existence. Stumbling from beneath satin sheets, you make your way into the kitchen, the subfloor heating welcoming your toes. The coffee maker greets you, percolating with snorts and whuffs as your beverage - black and sugarless - is dispensed. The automatic blinds ( Read more... )

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karmasoup April 1 2014, 15:54:46 UTC
I can see how some would call it creepy, but, heck, I would TOTALLY take it!

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beautyofgrey April 1 2014, 18:58:43 UTC
*laughing* There's nothing wrong with it, as long as you're happy working for it. I can see the appeal of it, but I don't know about having it all for myself.

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beautyofgrey April 1 2014, 18:58:52 UTC
Thank you!

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watching_ships April 1 2014, 19:27:57 UTC
love what you did with this. the way you paced it is almost hypnotizing.

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beautyofgrey April 2 2014, 14:07:24 UTC
Thank you! :D

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mezzominty April 1 2014, 21:18:01 UTC
Cool structure, very creative!

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beautyofgrey April 2 2014, 14:07:33 UTC
Thank you very much! <3

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ghosted April 1 2014, 22:26:03 UTC
I like this! Spooky take on the prompt. Shout out to appropriately used second person \o/

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beautyofgrey April 2 2014, 14:08:04 UTC
Yay! I always worry when I pull out second person. It can go so wrong so easily.

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