Lj Idol - 3 Strikes - Morgenmuffel

Mar 06, 2022 11:54

An entry for Week 3 of  therealljidol.
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bleodswean March 7 2022, 15:31:11 UTC
You wrote this in a week's time??? That's amazing if you can write long like this ON DEMAND! You definitely know your characters and have a story that wants telling. Keep going!

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beautyofgrey March 10 2022, 03:15:22 UTC

:) It is a bit lengthy and that is probably because this family has been floating around in my head after they were born out of a 5 minute prompt exercise I did a while back.... though the last week gave me some time to really think on and flesh them out a bit more. I really wish I had more time to write than cram sessions after work/dinner!

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banana_galaxy March 8 2022, 02:26:25 UTC
Are you planning on continuing to write in this world/with these characters? There are so many nuggets here I have questions about that I'd be curious to see explored further.

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beautyofgrey March 10 2022, 03:22:02 UTC

I'm definitely considering it! I left this one open-ended because the more I worked with it, the more I wanted to stay with it. It shall depend on what clauderainsrm's prompts allow, I guess! (Constructive feedback/questions are always welcome.)

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banana_galaxy March 10 2022, 06:21:45 UTC
Some things I'm curious about:

* The charm - as in, I wonder if it has any magical/mystical components? Is there more to the charm than what we've seen so far?

* How the gardening develops, including Morgan's relationship with Crownie.

* Is the family secretly magic, and so Morgan is bored attending a school with a bunch of non-magical people, or is this more like a world where they're surrounded by other people who also know how to do magic?

* And, as someone who has lost her mother, I'd also be curious to learn more about her, their past and such, maybe with flashbacks or through stories and conversations.

So if any future prompts allow you to explore these characters further, those are the things I'd love to see delved into further.

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adoptedwriter March 8 2022, 17:45:55 UTC
This was a fun one! I’m hoping to see more chapters!

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beautyofgrey March 10 2022, 03:22:33 UTC

Thanks!

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engarian March 8 2022, 20:10:19 UTC
I'm totally in love with this family and this character. Bravo!

- Erulisse (one L)

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beautyofgrey March 10 2022, 03:22:46 UTC

Thank you!!

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dsrmousey March 8 2022, 20:52:23 UTC
Loved loved loved this! I love the characters and the tale and didn't want it to end!Peace~~~D

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beautyofgrey March 11 2022, 02:08:55 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

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