Coffee Break [oneshot]

Feb 14, 2011 18:00

Title: Coffee Break
Author: aibakawaii
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2335
Summary: Ohno likes going to a café for his coffee break, but it's not exactly the drink that he goes there for.
A/N: FFFFFFFFF. This is probably very boring, hah. It's just a lil Valentine's fic, kind of quickly written..and..egh. Well, anyway, let's hope Ohmiya are having their ( Read more... )

c : chinen yuri, *arashi, c : ninomiya kazunari, r : pg, g : fluff, #oneshot, p : nino/ohno, c : ohno satoshi, g : au

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oneterrorist February 14 2011, 23:53:28 UTC
awwwww♥
Valentine's day, i love you!since all this love-filled fanfics keep coming ;DD

The ending was so sweet and Chinen... just let Ohmiya be happy D:

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aibakawaii February 15 2011, 00:04:16 UTC
Heheh, Ohmiya's Valentine's must always be fluff-filled!

Lol oh Chinen...At least he didn't really get in the way that much in the end! :3

Thanks for reading~ ♥

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tonieboo0013 February 15 2011, 01:28:33 UTC
And then in a single motion, when their knees touched and Nino smiled at him,

BEST MOMENT. I could just see it inside my head, a-and it fits the whole laid back "relationship" Ohmiya had this time around.

/flicks open Microsoft Word & gets to work...4realz

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aibakawaii February 15 2011, 01:56:46 UTC
B'aw yay, I was worried on how to close it. XD


LOL. D8< *swats you away*

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tonieboo0013 February 15 2011, 02:39:35 UTC
HEY. I AM HALF DONE. SHIT. THIS IS SO EASYYY.

But yes, this was ao adorable alksjdhsk. I liked how it was very natural, slow paced, and the characters seemed very real and down to earth. Nothing too out of place happened (besides the bathroom scene but lmao that had to happen ♥).

And the little part where the waitress poked Nino for being on his DS made me laugh, cause that's what happens to me at work when I'm caught nibbling on Skittles and there are customers to be served.

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aibakawaii February 15 2011, 12:33:09 UTC
LOOOL YAY FOR FINISHING!! XD ♥

Baha I didn't really think this fic through. *just wrote whatever* D8< But I'm glad it came out that way (for the most part) xD !

Haha! I DON'T HAVE A JOB SO I CAN'T RELATE. but erm, yeah, technically Nino always IS playing games during work huh. :D

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ichi_toshimiya February 15 2011, 01:32:00 UTC
aaaw so sweet...
I wish I can drink a coffee too... XD

thanks for sharing it...

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aibakawaii February 17 2011, 00:26:18 UTC
Lol yes, I don't drink coffee now but it'd be nice for a scenario like this in the future huh? xP

Thank you for reading! ^^

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himitsu_17 February 15 2011, 08:42:16 UTC
Doki Doki *-* My heart is all doki doki XD
It's so so so so so so so so cute!

OMG I absolutely love it!
*__________________*

*dead by cuteness*

Thank you so much!!
When I'll be back home I'll print it for sure *-*
Kyaaa !!! *_*

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aibakawaii February 21 2011, 01:31:19 UTC
Hehe I'm happy you think so~! :'D (whoa print? *o*)
Thank you for the comment!! ♥♥

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kami_desu February 15 2011, 11:08:50 UTC
cute~
ahhhh~ I want to meet someone (Nino) like that too xD but I would be to shy xD unlike Oh-chan ^^

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aibakawaii February 21 2011, 01:59:21 UTC
Bahaha we should start going to more cafes now. ;D Although true, Ohno's straightforwardness is something..

Thanks for reading! :D

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