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beaversmackies

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Nov 13, 2003 22:40

after work i went to tuffany's.driving home i kept almost driving into traffic.like literally.going into a curve, i'd be like '...there's no reason to follow through with this'.
that seems to be what each and every boy from the past six months has said about me.
there's no reason to follow through with this.

( and this is my view on love, friends )

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ex_zapper411 November 13 2003, 23:55:04 UTC

you did a really good job on this. i've read the book a number of times and i agree with all of your points. here are some suggestions, just my opinions ( ... )

beaversmackies November 14 2003, 03:05:01 UTC

eeeeyyyyuuurrrrgghhhhh thank you so much.
it all helped, indeed.the only thing i cannot use is that it has to be five paragraphs.
thank youuuuu.

probable_cause November 14 2003, 21:06:10 UTC

oi, i enjoyed that one. :>
i love that book, and especially For Esme With Love and Squalor, so it made your essay especially interesting to me.
Well done!

probable_cause November 14 2003, 21:08:22 UTC

p.s. i definitely agree w/ tying the poem back into the essay in the conclusion. i kind of forgot about it by the time i got to the end, so tying it in will give the poem a little more...for lack of a better word...purpose. or something.