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Dec 04, 2010 16:25

Title: Getting Lucky
Author: Becky_H
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Characters: Reid/Hotch
Genre: PWP. Established Relationship.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Mild BDSM.
Word Count: 1,100 exactly.
Summary: Sex? Set post-Nameless, Faceless.
Author’s Notes: I wrote this in my journal, in 100 word chunks to try to get myself writing again. So, it’s divided ( Read more... )

fic, drabble collection, slash, criminal minds

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becky_writing December 4 2010, 23:00:35 UTC
Thanks! This... really helped me feel better and get a better grip on them. ...Now I'm writing FLooding fic. *laughs*

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becky_writing December 4 2010, 23:09:30 UTC
Oh, I'm gonna. (THANK YOU THANK you, and thank you some more.)

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_medley_ December 5 2010, 02:33:22 UTC
I don't know Reid at all, only know Hotch a little and have a vague idea of what happened before this, and. It really doesn't matter. I love that it's not romantic at all, no unrealistic h/c "healing sex," and yet amidst the pissed-offness, physical awkwardness and pain, Reid puts his hand over Hotch's stomach and Hotch braces Reid's knee. It's understated but the care despite everything comes through.

Between Hotch’s stubbornness and Reid’s problem-solving skills the biggest real hurdle is getting over their fear of really hurting each other, and they respect each other too much not to accept the other’s word that they’re okay for this.

That was where I fell in love, right there. Well, it probably started with The only thing sex accomplishes is sex, and they both know it. Neither expects a transcendental experience, the earth to move, or to fall into the most perfect love ever loved.

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becky_writing December 5 2010, 02:35:46 UTC
*giggles* Thanks. Actually, that very first line is what kept sticking in my head. I am SO SICK of sex being This Big Romantic Thing That Heals All. Maybe if you're Jack and leaking time out your ass, but not in general.

...And you generally loved the bits I liked about it. The bracing and supporting each other and TAKING EACH OTHER"S WORD FOR IT. ...THat's another peeve. "Are you sure?" "I'm sure." ARE YOU SURE?!:" "Positive" "I don't know, I might hurt you. Better not." ...It's disrespectful and aggravating, even to read.

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_medley_ December 5 2010, 02:44:38 UTC
"Maybe if you're Jack and leaking time out your ass," made me laugh so hard Sid got off my lap in disgust.

I hadn't really thought about it being disrespectful, but it SO IS. That really is aggravating, and I don't think it had registered why in my head before.

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becky_writing December 5 2010, 02:45:22 UTC
I win. I disturbed Sid.

Yep. It's very "I don't trust you with you.'

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spiderweb_wine December 5 2010, 07:12:26 UTC
Yay! Tough and quiet, I liked it.

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becky_writing December 5 2010, 13:42:55 UTC
Thanks. I'm still very carefully to find my groove/rhythm again and get a little more confident in another fandom as well as writing in general. It's taking some time but it's fun again and that's good.

And I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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spiderweb_wine December 6 2010, 06:17:13 UTC
The fun part is the most important, when it's fun, it shows.

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