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[becky_writing]

Title: Three.
Author: Becky_H
Characters/Pairing: Reid/Hotch.
Genre: Slash.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Very mild D/s.
Word Count: 1,200
Spoilers: Nameless, Faceless and 100.
Beta: None.
Summary: Reid has questions. Hotch has answers. Reid breaks something, cleans up and finds out what Lesson 3 is.
Author’s Notes: Set after Stand and Beyond Fear. I wrote this

Comments

[stackcats]

I'd forgotten how good you are at making the little things that happen in a scene reflect the much bigger things that are happening in the characters' heads. And how your prose comes over as very simplistic, but contains such a lot.

[becky_writing]

I really do blame laziness on my simplistic prose that says anything. And coma avoidance, sometimes *G*

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[stackcats]

I'm gonna give you a box of commas for Christmas :p

(You want eyes back on that other fic? I wouldn't like to peek at someone's writing without being invited, but I'm also not ignoring it)

[becky_writing]

But what would I do with them!?

I haven't. Touched it. I got side tracked by writing porn. I'll get back to it in the morning and you're always invited to peek at it.

[_medley_]

He’s been watching the mug get closer to the edge with every revolution, and waiting for the fall and break.

Oh, I love that, both the phrasing and the metaphor. And “Only when I say you are.” made me laugh. I'm really falling in love with these two and I haven't officially met them yet.

[becky_writing]

If only I'd caught the metaphor when I wrote it. I am so bad about that.

[becky_writing]

That Hotch keeps cracking me up. He started in such a serious verse but ultimately, dammit he's the 'sub' but he's calling the shots and like hell he's leaving his floor sticky. (Thank you)

[ice_ziggee]

I can´t pinpoint one more amazing thing that hasn´t been mentioned above, I love this little universe you´ve created. Of course Reid is curious, it´s in his nature to want to know 'everything' and I think he´s a quick learner too.

Your Hotch being 'sub' but still dominating, is IMO, very natural as Hotch is a very much an Alpha mail, and all of this is still very new between them. As you (very likely) know, the subs are really the once who call the shots and a relationship between dom & sub is really about TRUST.

I want to see more lessons and really hope you continue this...

[becky_writing]

I will almost certainly continue it because it is so fun for me. I think the thing that MAKES it fun is how easily I can Reid being, yes, very curious but also getting that KICK out of people having faith in them and. Hotch is an alpha male, but really he's got all the responsibility he can handle right now so for him, sure, if he can get Reid into it and he gets to let go and give it up sometimes? He's down with that.

THANK YOU. ...I should get this posted into a comm eventually. Maybe after the next section.