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Dec 31, 2010 06:52

Title: Coda to: Officer Down!
Author: Becky_H
Genre: Gen, H/c.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 500
Warnings: Unbeta'd. There will be grammar errors.
Summary:: I promised folks I'd write a happy ending for Officer Down!(linked in title) before the new year. I try to keep my promises, so here you go.
He wakes up in the hospital, without any memory of how he got there. )

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anonymous December 31 2010, 12:55:51 UTC
I like the banter; it sounded very real to me (like something people would actually say), but I have one question: if Hotch got shot in the torso, why would he need crutches? Just wondering.

Well-written, regardless.

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becky_writing December 31 2010, 12:57:02 UTC
In the previous entry there's a remark that where he got hit was actually just at the top of his hip/pelvis with some talk of bone shifting around (at the bottom of the kevlar) so that's gotta be dealt with.

And THANK YOU.

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anonymous December 31 2010, 23:14:00 UTC
No problem, my pleasure! (to read)

But...he still wouldn't need crutches.

My apologies, nitpicky anon iz nitpicky

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cmali December 31 2010, 15:30:42 UTC
Awww!! Love is in the air! LOL!! Great ending, but you know we would all love the next part too. We're greedy whores, like that :)

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becky_writing December 31 2010, 16:04:14 UTC
Thanks!

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donutsweeper December 31 2010, 16:11:38 UTC
“This is how you thank me for saving your life? Great, see if I do it again.”

bwhahahaha, that is so perfect for Reid.

YAY for the happy ending! :)

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becky_writing December 31 2010, 17:29:40 UTC
Reid's awesome and thank you.

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daylyn December 31 2010, 17:01:12 UTC
Yay for happy endings! Love the banter, and love Reid's obvious worry as well as Hotch's worry for Reid. Morgan and the jello is pretty damn perfect too. Thanks for this; it's a great addition to "Officer Down" (of course now we want some more fics in this universe because we're greedy like that, but I'm grateful for this too.)

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becky_writing December 31 2010, 17:29:11 UTC
Thanks! I might someday do real followup but mostly I just wanted to give people something that effectively said 'oh hey, he's not dead' ;-)

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michelel72 December 31 2010, 17:32:21 UTC
Awww, team! Yay!

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becky_writing December 31 2010, 17:32:41 UTC
AWESOME Icon. (Thank you!)

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