Fic: Ten Drabbles (TW, Jack/Ianto) R...ish

Aug 18, 2008 22:57

TITLE: Ten Drabbles
AUTHOR: Bedsidekibbles
RATING: Rish
Genre: A lot of angst, but a couple fluffs
DISCLAIMER: Torchwood is property of RTD and the BBC.
CHARACTERS/PAIRINGS: Jack/Ianto, mentions of others
WORDS: Somewhere just under 2200 in all
SUMMARY: As the title says, 10 drabbles.
AUTHOR'S NOTES: So, this is my first story in (according to Livejournal ( Read more... )

torchwood, jack/ianto

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crazytook August 20 2008, 01:19:36 UTC
hey, welcome to the fanfic writing world of tw! this was a great start. i really liked i wont go home with out you. i don't really have any constructive criticism, this prompt makes it pretty difficult to actually give any because of the length of the stories, and the fact you wrote them within the time span of a song.

but overall, i really liked it. a lot of them were really sweet, and sad too. and i really liked the last one, your whole take on how jack loves ianto. that he's the one, but not. although, not so sure ianto helped jack love again-but that is so very very debatable.

but this was good, and i really would love to see you write more. i personally would love to see you write more about ianto finding out about the year that wasn't. you wrote it here so nicely from jack's perspective, and i always love stories where jack shares the year that wasnt with ianto in a nice simple way.

very good, i will be looking for your future stories.

kudos!
crazytook

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thrace_adams August 22 2008, 20:09:11 UTC
These were beautiful! Truly beautiful. Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff :)

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