Comments | beederiffic: Fic: Extra Ordinary, part 1 (Hawkeye/Coulson)

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Fic: Extra Ordinary, part 1 (Hawkeye/Coulson)

Feb 19, 2012 13:15

Title: Extra Ordinary, part 1
Pairing: Hawkeye/Coulson
Rating: Eventual NC-17
Length: 5k
Warnings:
Because of/For: aliassmith, damn you!
Summary: Phil's always appreciated the way Hawkeye handles his weapon
A/N: Writing this concurrently with something else, so will update later in the week soon as I've made some progress elsewhere.

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i need a non-zq icon, hawkeye/coulson, fic

Comments 13

1lostone February 19 2012, 14:09:07 UTC

OH MY GOD I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW THAT I NEEDED THIS IN MY LIFE UNTIL I SAW HAWKEYE'S NAME!!!

*chinhands*

beederiffic February 19 2012, 14:44:50 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAH YOU'RE READING IT?!

It's all aliassmith's fault. I was all BOOOOO@STEVE/TONY, WHERE IS ALL THE HAWKEYE SLASH and she pointed me at some Clint/Coulson and I was MIND GONE FOREVER.

1lostone February 19 2012, 15:45:32 UTC

Yeah, even though every time I see it I think of MASH, I'm sure I'll get over that eventually.

And yeah, I'm reading it! If anyone can lead me blindly into another fandom, it would be you bb. :D<3

lanyon February 19 2012, 17:16:39 UTC

I'm actually not sure how I stumbled on this but I'm so glad I did. It is full of gems; the dialogue shines, the turns of phrase are wonderful and the little glimpses of Phil's few insecurities are really well stated. I sincerely hope there's more and soon. :)

kat8cha February 19 2012, 18:31:42 UTC

Oooh, I'm interested! Great start.

dizmo February 19 2012, 20:50:40 UTC

Linked to this, and glad I was , because eee, this is fabulous! Can't wait to see how it goes and Nick is totally playing matchmaker, isn't he.

:D

aliassmith February 20 2012, 02:48:12 UTC

One of these days he was going to rip Tony's hand off at the wrist and smack him with it when it patronizingly pats his shoulder like this. One day. Soon.

The Tony-voice in a lot of fics is so hit and miss, but oh my god-- you have the Stark snark down and it's only the first scene!

A little red devil dances on Phil's shoulder and asks what would happen if Phil were to reply, 'As a matter of fact, I swallow.' Very likely nothing good.

adhdjhkhj;ljkgfg BRAIN = FRIED.

I love that line about Phil's "reminders" really being orders because YES, that's so perfectly in line with how I see him-- there's something so unassuming about him sometimes, but anyone who gets close enough, who really knows him, knows he can tear them apart with his pinkie finger and that any "words of advice" he might have for them should definitely be taken seriously. He really is the bamfiest of bamfs.

I think Stark stole Barton's lunch money or something, so we're moving into wedgie territory.The whole 'Avengers are giant fifth graders' thing? ACCURATE ( ... )

bottledminx February 20 2012, 03:23:49 UTC

Okay yes, all of this is the most accurate. THANK YOU for every part you had in making this be in my eyes.