hooked [for everyone]

Mar 03, 2015 17:20

For: everyone
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language, (implied/brief) sexual content
Word count: 4k+
Author's Note: thank you to N and C, who were both great help and motivation. thank you to mods, who were very patient with me. lastly, thank you to my recipient for the prompts! this fic took an entire different spin than intended (and expected), but ( Read more... )

#round 1, word count: less than 5k, rating: pg-13

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gdgdbaby March 4 2015, 21:04:51 UTC
DIES this story was so cute! i love sehun as the cheeky model and YOUR BAEKHYUN IS SO GREAT LMAO “Candy,” Baekhyun says. Chanyeol probably meant the model. “It was pretty cute, shitting aside.” I LOVED THIS LINE SO MUCH and all the banter between baekchen was excellent :') (Baekhyun hurries back a few seconds later, pecks the side of Jongdae’s head and then promptly kicks him out.) why is this the cutest image ever >3< lmfao i also really liked suho in the opening scene, what a dorky dad u__u i thought the non linear timeline was rly interesting and i totally didn't see that plot twist coming so kudos to you author :3 ♥

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cocacola April 30 2015, 21:37:54 UTC
lmao how do you always manage to pick out mine even when i don't even have you beta it or anything. THEN AGAIN, I DO THE SAME WITH YOURS.. but thank youuuuuu, huhuhu, i'm really glad you enjoyed it and i'm so happy the timeline/plot twist worked out! i was worried about that x__x thank you for commenting :*

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cocacola April 30 2015, 21:59:55 UTC
eeeee, thank you for this awesome comment! i was actually worried that the time jumps in the story would confuse people (although i was actually sort of counting on it until the ~big reveal/plot twist so it'd kind of be like 'oh so THAT's why he did this/that' so i'm really glad it didn't feel out of place!

and honestly, i was also incredibly worried that i didn't delve into the whole model/journalist aspect of the fic enough, or their relationship (which could've been more ~angsty but i kind of wanted to make this a nice/fun read? i'm terrible at angst, really) so i'm also incredibly happy that you liked the direction it went into!

both baekchen and kaibaek (and even 2jong) are some of my favorite pairs so i couldn't not include them, huhu. thank you again so much for reading and taking the time to comment!

(also! i noticed that you'd guessed me for another fic, and while it wasn't mine, i thought it was really cute that someone guessed me, lmao. so thank you!)

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baekfics March 5 2015, 23:21:11 UTC

SeBaek feels! Love this!
This is so super cute. Heart heart

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cocacola April 30 2015, 21:39:23 UTC
thank you so much for commenting! i'm glad you enjoyed it, i love me some sebaek ❤❤❤

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theperfnerd March 25 2015, 20:09:01 UTC
“Shut up, Chanyeol,” Baekhyun groans, because how is he supposed to talk himself out of that one? “Shut up forever. -

about the best line in this fic tbh aksgskdh

I really, really love how you crafted sebaek's relationship like it's just so adorable my feelings are all over the place and bratty sehun is just so perfect and I really absolutely adore how you characterise your baekhyun

(also the baekchen friendship is real I love it so much)

(and jongin is so cute??)

I think I'll be reading this again really soon it's just really interesting I'm full on feels thank you for writing this

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cocacola April 30 2015, 22:10:56 UTC
scream, baekyeol as bffs is so fun to write for me although i didn't get much of a chance to in here.

i think baekhyun is probably my favorite person in exo to write about because i feel like he has so many different/other sides to him other than just the loudmouth, he has such a big (and good) personality, imo. and sehun is one of the people who balances him out so nicely and brings out the best, so i wanted to kind of show that in here? so i'm happy that you loved them in this! (and also baekchen and jongin, these kids who i adore to no end ❤ )

thank you so much for commenting, i'm incredibly glad that you enjoyed it!

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bringnsexsebaek March 25 2015, 21:24:51 UTC
Omg all of their interactions together were just... great. At first I was like 'oh, shit, Baek, you screwed up' but then Sehun's reaction proved that he wasn't insulted, just amused, and it made me wonder why...
the fact that they knew each other before was not expected but answered my questions kekeke and the fact that they were a /thing/ made me supersuperhappy.
Cuz, like, I could totally see this. Sehun is so gorgeous he could definitely be a model... and I can for sure see him falling for Baek and wanting to be exclusive and stuff and just hajskegrlhtejoir so fluffyyyy thank you for these happy feelings ^-^ this comment is all over the place... just know that I really, really liked this and the world always needs more Sebaek<3

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cocacola April 30 2015, 22:15:28 UTC
thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! and hehe, that was exactly what i was going for, readers wondering why sehun wasn't insulted and actually seemed familiar with baekhyun, and then the reveal that they've been dating all along. so i'm glad that worked out!! and YES, sehun could definitely be a model, especially with his height, that kid is so tall... i'm extremely glad that you liked it! and i agree, the world does need more sebaek, they're so lovable ;; ❤

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