LJI: The Streisand Effect

[beeker121]

“3…2…1.. Ready or not, here I come

Comments

[roina_arwen]

Oooooh - this was such a great take on the topic! I love the bogeywomen idea!

[beeker121]

Thanks. I was really stuck until hiding things became hide-and seek. Sometimes the last minute inspiration actually works.

[tsuki_no_bara]

i was not expecting that! what an interesting tack, to have a bogeywoman scouting towns for her family to snack on, and faking out little kids who think they know how to hide. i like it!

[beeker121]

Thank you. This started as a sweet story of hide-and-seek and not finding kids too quickly; then it veered.

[halfshellvenus]

Eeeeeee!

I was not expecting that twist. Especially because she's helping to delude those kids that they're hiding well. :O

[beeker121]

Yay for eeee's.

The first idea I had was about playing hide and seek, and then it twisted. I'm glad it could surprise you.

[adoptedwriter]

Great storytelling!

[beeker121]

Thank you!

[lyssa027]

I really enjoyed this :) what a cool concept

[beeker121]

Yay, thanks. I don't tread into scary very often, I'm glad it worked.