that poem is so powerful. it's incredible, geunuine, and sincere. your poetry always has the ability to strike me. you're an amazing poet. but if it isn't your own composition, then tell me who its author is because i love it.
aw you're far too sweet emilini! and yes it's mine...It'd odd because it's not necessarily what I feel now but reflecting on things and knowing how one's self can carry emotions away were meant to be reflected in this poem...thank you so much and aw you no what I think about your writing!
"it's not necessarily what i feel now but reflecting on things"
i know what you mean. most of my poems are not about what i'm feeling at that moment either. i find that i can write better poems once the emotions from which they are drawn have passed - because then i understand how i felt, and thus can write about it succesfully. sometimes it's harder to write about what you feel in the moment because the feelings don't always make perfect sense, even to ourselves.
great poem sabeen! it's so true...*sigh* lol and i love your background! it brings back art memories...your painting was freaking better than van gogh's! see you in art... ~mazie~
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i know what you mean. most of my poems are not about what i'm feeling at that moment either. i find that i can write better poems once the emotions from which they are drawn have passed - because then i understand how i felt, and thus can write about it succesfully. sometimes it's harder to write about what you feel in the moment because the feelings don't always make perfect sense, even to ourselves.
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i hear you
and i unddderrstandddddd
smile ^_^
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and i love your background! it brings back art memories...your painting was freaking better than van gogh's!
see you in art...
~mazie~
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