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A Menacing Whisper

Jul 21, 2010 13:19

Title: A Menacing Whisper
Author: djkiwi2576
Rating: PG
Disclaimer/Spoilers: I don't own BBC's Merlin or any characters from the Arthurian Legend
Summary: Regrets are not the only things that haunt Camelot's king
A/N: A random - fictional idea - that grew into a oneshot when I was really bored.

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fanwork: fanfic, type: canonverse, type: romance, length: one-shot, character: uther, type: pre-canonverse, type: angst, pairing: uther/igraine, rating: pg

Comments 10

sgmajorshipper July 21 2010, 17:27:08 UTC

Ohhh this is just haunting and so bittersweet. Very, very good!

djkiwi2576 July 21 2010, 17:33:01 UTC

Mwahhh!!!!!!!!

Thank you.

starry_laa July 21 2010, 18:13:47 UTC

That was lovely and beautifully written. I love the idea of Gwen's mother being a lady stripped of her nobility.

djkiwi2576 July 21 2010, 18:30:49 UTC

Thank you so much. I kind of like the idea of that backstory too because it erases a major obstacle preventing a royal marriage :)

buffyangellvr23 July 21 2010, 21:08:56 UTC

oooh nice :)

I wonder why he took away her title.

*snuggles him to make him feel better*

djkiwi2576 July 21 2010, 22:08:32 UTC

Thank you my dear. I tried to imply it was due to debt her father left them in. Oh King Uther Giles can get a hug any day.

buffyangellvr23 July 22 2010, 03:34:09 UTC

Oh crap, I don't know how I missed it. I see it now.

BTW one little spelling thing...the "Idol hands" part should really be "Idle hands" I think.

djkiwi2576 July 22 2010, 03:49:48 UTC

Thanks for the catch. I updated that one and another found :) That's what I get for posting without a beta read thru.

archaeologist_d July 22 2010, 12:46:25 UTC

Lovely. I liked that Uther loved a girl that he couldn't have and that it was Gwen's mom. Good job.

djkiwi2576 July 22 2010, 12:53:49 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.