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May 01, 2010 23:47

Title: Best Case Scenario
Author: gothic_veils
Characters/Pairing: Annie and Mitchell, gen
Rating: PG
Warnings: None.
Notes Written for djarum99 prompt Mitchell's POV on news of Herrick's return. I'm sort of ignoring the whole what happened to Annie thing for the purpose of this fic. Also sorry about the rather abrupt ending.
Summary: Herrick's back, so what now?

Best Case Scenario )

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djarum99 May 2 2010, 15:29:56 UTC
Thank you so much!

I like Mitchell's inner dialogue, and the sense of rising fear. Herrick's return was a shock in episode eight, and you've captured the horror of that here, as well as Mitchell's frantic energy.

Great work, and I really appreciate the story ♥

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purple_cube May 2 2010, 15:55:41 UTC
Herrick's return will certainly be interesting! This is a nice take on what might go through Mitchell's mind when he finds out.

Thank you for taking part in the ficathon!

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mylittlestorys May 2 2010, 18:03:45 UTC
Excellent, you really did capture the mood of what's to come. Could visualise this happening on the show.

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cagedlight May 3 2010, 17:48:34 UTC
Like mylittlestorys, I can totally see this happening on the show, Herrick is evil enough to not kill Mitchell but make him suffer for a very long, long time.

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owensheart May 5 2010, 15:58:05 UTC
I love how mitchell is conceren fore for his friends thatn himself that he would willingly go back to Herrick to save them.

Great fic. well written.

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