Control (3/?)

[bekahbabe06]

Title: Control
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Abby/Ziva
Spoilers: none
Summary:   Control.  It's what they have in common.
Rating: M
Disclaimer: These characters belong to Donald P. Bellisario, Bellisarius Productions, CBS, Paramount, etc. No copyright infringement intended.
Author's Note: Please feed the bard!  I welcome any and all constructive criticism,

Comments

[demoka]

phoar! that was wonderfully hot and mm! *grins toothily* yes, i think you've written more smut quite nicely !

personally though, OUCH! i shall not pierce any part of me! not unless they were speaking the truth when they said they'd hold me down and drag me to the ear piercing place! *runs away!*

i really like the hands in the back pocket. reminds me of things i like to do too!

[bekahbabe06]

That's a shame about the piercings... believe me, I speak (or in this case write) from experience. ;-P

What exactly does the exclamation phoar! mean anyway? My mind is having fun trying to work it out. Like phooey + roar = phoar...

[demoka]

well, for me, phoar is a phonetic expression of glee or like something you say while fanning yourself after reading a smutty/sexy scene! XP

[voodoochild_101]

o_O

More. Please. Now
*needs cold shower*

[badkittyamy]

i agree cold shower should be in the disclaimer as a warning

[swan_secrets]

Wow, incredibly hot.

[katiepult]

Wow. Mmhmm. Very nice part :)

[torpedo_x]

oh, yeah, that was really hot! No worries, you write smut really well! =) You should keep going! *hint* lol