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xtwilit_angelx November 16 2010, 03:28:15 UTC
SPOT~

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sam_theninja24 November 16 2010, 03:56:39 UTC
Love this fic! :D
Never would've guessed Onew was Taemin's brother!
Can't wait for more!
Sorry about your grandfather by the way, hope you feel better about it soon <3

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lovelyrazel November 16 2010, 04:15:20 UTC
OHOHOHOHOH! taeminnie got hit by a car ?!?!

no wonder he doesn't remember jinki as his brother :p

ahh, it's all slowly making sense now. thank you for that (:
mm, this chapter was just a little slice of everything. you got the suspense (cliffhanger) - darn you for that i must add; i absolutely detest cliffhangers, even if i do add them in my stories XD. you got the romance, taemin is slowly starting to fall in love with minho & minho is surely doing the same. you have the angst, really- i think jinki should just tell taemin, i agree with kibum- he'd understand & probably overjoice to find he has a sibling.

really, this story just makes my days you know. + i just woke from a nap. first thing for me to see this up as i awoke ? i think it was fate (:

continue writing, bb !

<3

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minti_panda93 November 16 2010, 04:17:52 UTC
aw im so sorry about your grandfather :( hope you feel better soon

wahhh the flashbacks
poor jinki....is it his fault he suffers from clumsiness and onew sangtae? :/

cant wait for the next update~!

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yesalmen November 16 2010, 04:23:27 UTC
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh so that is what happened, so Minho and Tae know each other before ohhhh
poor Jinki, you have to tell Tae you're his brother
and Tae you fall for Minho jojojo (Minho don't tease Tae)

I'll wait for next chapter thanks for this one, I love it.

Hwaiting!

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