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[beldarzfixon]

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[gingergirlslove]

That was interesting. Quite the adventure! Some good points on whose training who, and then tieing that in at the end.

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks! Colonists always underestimate the natives' intelligence, don't they? =)

[similiesslip]

I really like this:) I guess part of it is I like the idea of getting back to the basics. Our world is so complex these days I think many people rejoice a lot less because we have come to expected a lot more.

Simple can be best.

I like how creatively you used the prompt:)

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks. Yeah, that's often one of the themes and lessons of a Robinson Crusoe-style story, that return to simplicity. When you find that when that "the wheel" isn't ready-made for you and waiting at a store, you have to "reinvent' it.

[whipchick]

Neat to see the interplay between the colonists and the local fauna - this reads like a great start to a longer work!

[beldarzfixon]

That could be a neat side-effect to my entries here, that I someday find a way to expand on one of these shorts. But for now, I'll let the readers' imaginations run wild on where the story goes.

[alien_infinity]

I enjoyed this! I liked your take on the prompt a lot. ^_^

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks!

[shadowwolf13]

We always change our surrounding environment. :)

[beldarzfixon]

So true.