Tonight

Mar 03, 2012 01:44

The bus doors whoosh open. He stops going over the songs in his head and looks up to see the glint of the setting sun shining off the glass, like the star on his door. It's time. Eagerly, he steps through.

He pauses to look around him. People bustling, rushing to and fro. Got to get to your seats, my public, can't miss a moment.

He strolls down the ( Read more... )

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whipchick March 6 2012, 06:06:29 UTC
I really liked the personal reality this character was experiencing. Well-written, and intriguing!

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beldarzfixon March 7 2012, 04:47:46 UTC
Makes you wonder what the Second Act is like, right?

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basric March 6 2012, 07:40:52 UTC
I enjoyed.

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beldarzfixon March 7 2012, 04:47:53 UTC
Thank you!

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sarcasmoqueen March 6 2012, 15:39:36 UTC
Really liked all the musical references!

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beldarzfixon March 7 2012, 04:48:51 UTC
Finally all the musicals I've seen over the last decade (theatre critic is one of my jobs) has paid off. =)

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roadnotes March 6 2012, 19:46:20 UTC
Very nice, and for those of us who occasionally live our lives as musicals, very True to Life.

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beldarzfixon March 7 2012, 04:51:43 UTC
Thanks!
So, music constantly runs through your head, too? (It's not just me!)

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whirlgig March 7 2012, 16:05:27 UTC
Can't decide whether this guy is crazy or awesome. Either way you had me hooked, such a great take on the prompt. Well done!

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beldarzfixon March 8 2012, 04:49:27 UTC
Thanks! How about "awesomely crazy" -- I think that fits

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