Story of "an innocent bystander"

[beldarzfixon]

The following has been approved for
ALL AUDIENCES
By the imaginary motion picture association
Production company logo.

Interior of jail. Looking through bars of cell, man sits alone, dirty unkempt, sad and bewildered look on his face.
MAN’S VOICEOVER: I bet you’re wondering how I ended up here. So am I.

Quick cuts: Jet airliner landing. Various shots of

Comments

[minnesattva]

I love this! You nailed the tropes of movie trailers perfectly: the dialogue, the quick-cut scenes... I could see and hear it all :) Really well done.

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks! It was fun envisioning it in my head as I was creating it.
I also purposely wrote just "man" and "woman" so that the reader could dream-cast whoever seemed appropriate. Figured envisioning the "right" actors would enhance the experience. =)

[medleymisty]

Excellent trailer. Would watch again. ;)

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks! Now I just need the budget to make the rest of the film.

[lilycobalt]

I think this movie could easily be made! I'm pondering who to cast as the hapless protagonist. The quick cuts from chase scenes are my favorite part.

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks! Glad you like it.

[jem0000000]

Oh, wow. What an experience; poor dude. But maybe he had fun?

[beldarzfixon]

In retrospect, I'm sure he'd laugh... =)

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks!