How Debbie got a free year's supply of cereal

[beldarzfixon]

Comments

[alycewilson]

Very funny! And I swear I hadn't read this when I wrote my "Gobsmacked" piece. Great minds think alike.

[beldarzfixon]

I heard it once that great minds run in the same gutter, but that just shows the kind of people I run around with. =)

I liked your "Gobsmackers," too!

[alycewilson]

Thanks! Since I forgot to mention it in the previous comment, I loved the way the voice of this character comes through. I like the fact that her experience is almost dreamlike. You really captured well what it can be like to be that far pregnant: you become very emotional and instinctual, too.

[beldarzfixon]

Being a dude, I can only identify to a vague extent, but I do remember my then-wife in her 8th-9th months whining "I'M SO FAT!" -- to which what do I respond, when she is a human basketball, but that's a good thing?

Maybe this shows I picked up a bit more on that than I thought.

[basric]

LOL

[beldarzfixon]

=D

[medleymisty]

This was so totally awesome. I love the voice. :)

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks. I hoped it would work, be more folksy than "trashy" as I do like Debbie, bless her heart.

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks! She was a little distracted, though, thinking for two.

[roina_arwen]

Ha! I know the cereal name and stuff was based on Sugar Smacks, the one with the frog? Anyway, I lol'd. :)