Hayve

[beldarzfixon]

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

If Curious George were a dragon.....cute take on " be have". AW

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks. I was tempted to throw in some "the dragon was curious" but decided against it. =)

[jenny_evergreen]

So cute! I could lose the narrator bit...you don't need it and it distracts a bit...but you did an awesome job with the prompt! :)

[beldarzfixon]

I had thought the preceding graph was getting too rambly and bland (I thought it was longer before I posted), yet I wanted that bit of exposition, so I had Kaos play with the fourth wall (or go "meta" I guess). Thanks for being honest in your assessment, I need to know when my devices misfire. Glad you like it anyway! =)

[momebie]

I love how much character you've given the little guy.

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks! He's quite a character. =)

[myrna_bird]

" Probably some tomfoolery.”..
Kaos shook his head. He didn’t meet anyone named Tom."

I love this kind of innocence in your story. It was enjoyable and funny. I love the whimsical feel.

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks. It was as close as I wanted to get to putting the Topic word in the story, hint at it rather than write it, and when I considered how the dragon would hear the word, the response came naturally.

[unmowngrass]

Aww, I love this little dude! I want to hear more from him!

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks! He might show up again, you never know with creatures like him =)