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Jun 27, 2014 00:01

In cold, mathematical terms, two to three kilograms of pressure initiates a chain of events resulting in the release of, it is believed, 21 grams. But humans don't think in cold, mathematical terms ( Read more... )

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jem0000000 July 2 2014, 00:15:52 UTC
Great job on capturing that sense of inevitability. :)

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beldarzfixon July 2 2014, 02:10:53 UTC
Thank you!

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jem0000000 July 4 2014, 07:29:01 UTC
You're welcome. :)

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kajel July 2 2014, 02:36:05 UTC
I love how the gun relates to so many things that once done, can't be undone.

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beldarzfixon July 2 2014, 04:45:06 UTC
True!
Thanks for the comment

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uncawes July 2 2014, 05:21:15 UTC
Nicely done.
Since I mostly write horror - current LJI works notwithstanding - I got into sync with this from the get go.
Nice references too.

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beldarzfixon July 3 2014, 03:38:20 UTC
Thanks! Good to know I struck a good chord there.

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dreamsreflected July 3 2014, 02:32:25 UTC
brilliant!

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beldarzfixon July 3 2014, 03:38:39 UTC
Thank you!

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halfshellvenus July 3 2014, 04:29:13 UTC
note that the bullet -- or arrow or cannonball -- can be metaphorical. The gun we fire can be the careless word said, giving a direction to go left instead of right, pressing the "enter" key.

Such an interesting way of expanding this idea. All forms are danger unleashed an unable to be recalled before the damage is done.

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beldarzfixon July 3 2014, 05:11:34 UTC
As the song says, "words are weapons, sharper than knives"

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