Harvest Moon

[beldarzfixon]

This here was going to be the story of why there would be no Harvest Dance this year at Oubliette High

Comments

[roina_arwen]

Great voice in this! Gotta figure there's going to be something odd about a town called Oubliette, LOL.

[beldarzfixon]

It is where I like to stow away the spooky stuff =)

[lrig_rorrim]

Oh I love this. Your Oubliette stories are always so rich, and the magic has that familiar-turned-sideways feel. <3

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks. You may notice the events described happen before the ones in my first Oubliette story.

[bleodswean]

Fun voice here. Your dancing descriptors were hilarious - The wild-hairs jumped into the middle of the floor with somethin' between a jitterbug and a medical fit,

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks. The narrator seems to be an old fart like me, and today's kids dancing can look like that. =)

[mistearyusdiva2]

This is the first time I am reading something on Oubliette ... Not sure if I missed something this season or its juts my memory ... But Oh Boy I loved the voice here and the setting and the descriptions. I could almost picture the narrator .... Well Done ... and yeah like mama Said " Once u start a dance .. you dont end it ... you've got see it through. The same with Oubliete ... :)

[beldarzfixon]

If you click on the "Oubliette" tag you'll find two other stories, so this is the third one so far.

In a private file I also have some notes on characters, for instance that the Creole girl's name Poco is short for the nickname "Pocohontas" since she's apparently part Native American.

[eternal_ot]

I liked the set up...and the place sure has something going on...Interesting read and I enjoyed it!

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks!