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Apr 04, 2009 22:47

Title: Entropy or The False Sense of Happiness
Pairing: JaeChunMin
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Entropy: the inevitable and steady deterioration of a system or society.

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belfire April 5 2009, 19:51:11 UTC

..I can't believe I wrote that. I actually blush a little reading it and thinking I did.

I'm glad you liked it ^^ Actually, I've read your fics and really like your style, but because I'm usually at least two weeks late I don't comment. Sorry :( So... this could be a summary of the unposted comments - I really really like your writings and your ideas ^^

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belfire April 5 2009, 20:45:51 UTC

It's not arrogant at all and I absolutely understand the lack of time. I suffer from it too ( ... )

kurogoma April 6 2009, 01:16:45 UTC

i like this. :D

so yoochun is a heartbreaker, huh? breaking both changmin`s and jaejoong`s hearts and probably losing both of them to each other in the end. jaejoong, in the last part, seemingly about to find a way out of his relationship with yoochun ~ this is alittle comforting.

belfire April 6 2009, 12:57:30 UTC

Bad Yoochun, bad :D I hoped it wouldn't turn out very sad. Mostly... apathetic. But as long as it's a pleasant read it's ok ^^

doma_arsonica April 6 2009, 04:38:36 UTC

oh this was very good, and both sad, but hopeful in a way. At least they found past Yoochun to each other.

belfire April 6 2009, 12:59:26 UTC

Thank you :)

Past Yoochun, through Yoochun... because if he hadn't rejected Changmin then Jae would have been alone.

irene014 April 7 2009, 07:35:30 UTC

wah this is good i like it a lot ♥
and Yoochunnie is such a bad boy in here

belfire April 7 2009, 13:13:45 UTC

I gotta be a bad boy~

Thank you, glad you liked it ^^

leia_greenleaf July 10 2009, 08:59:21 UTC

I know that you wrote this months ago, but I've just found it at the JaeMin community and HAD to comment.
I'm absolutely in love with this piece of writing! It's not often that I save the fic for myself to re-read it.
I love angst and love fiction which smacks you in the face with its realism. No fluff and happy ending. The way you describe JaeChun dying relationships is depressing, but so real. But that's what I love about it!
I don't know what to think about Yoochun in this one. I feel bad for him. He is tired and doesn't know what he wants from Jae...or he whants nothing from nobody. He badly needs to fall in love. (sequel...2U please?)).
But most of all I feel bad for Jae. Yoochun no longer loves him, Changmin loves Yoochun.
Thank you!

belfire July 15 2009, 15:31:09 UTC

Thank you for commenting even though so much time has passed since i posted this! For me it means the fic really was a good read.
I think that even in fanfiction realism is an important part of the mix and that's why I usually try to make things realistic. I'm glad I did well!
I probably won't be writing a sequel though. This was meant to be a stand-alone. But let's believe Yoochun has found someone else to love and he's happy =)