{fic} Who Do You Think You Are?

[believethis6]

He kissed me.

Was it supposed to be this startling? It shouldn’t hurt this much. I hate him, don’t I?

But when I saw him two months later, the day I decided to go visit the New Directions after school, it nearly broke me. I had turned the corner, a familiar smile etched upon my lips, and stopped short. My head tilted in a confused fashion.

Comments

[meghan_84]

Intersting approach I love the song BTW!

[believethis6]

Thank you! So do I. It's one of my favorites right now. :]

[lovesmymovement]

Oh jeez, pleeaasseeee continue this! I'm soooo loving this and would really love to see where you take it.

[believethis6]

I'll see where I can go with it, if I decide to continue (though I don't know where I'd go with it at all). Thanks for reviewing and loving my spur of the moment story. :)

[idyllictorture]

I loved this. I thought it was excellent, and it could be something that happens on the show.

Just one thing. "I peaked around the corner." It should be "peeked" Just a minor nitpik.

[believethis6]

Thank you! Oh yeah, I'll fix that right away, thanks for noticing it. :] It's always nice too get some positive feedback on a random one-shot I decide to write.

[carolina_hope]

wow, this is really intersting. and I wouldnt mind reading more. at all :)

[believethis6]

Thank you! I'll see what I can do. :]

[kalliasgrimm]

Dave having a beard is a really interesting idea, and I love the emotion of this piece, both Kurt's sadness and Dave's obvious discomfort and unhappiness.

Reaching out to talk to him, god my heart broke :C

[believethis6]

That's exactly what I was going for. I really want to feel the notion of Kurt being hurt by seeing Karofsky kissing someone else, nonetheless a girl. It's a different way of seeing things. I also wanted Karofsky to seem disgusted by what he was doing (which you got), so nice catching that. In my story, Karofsky is a confused closet-case or just GAY in similar terms, not bisexual or bi-curious, just gay. You were good with catching the beard part! :)

And to break your heart was my aim, so I feel pretty accomplished. Just kidding. I'll see what I can do to make that better.

[kalliasgrimm]

I agree with you - everytime I write about Karofsky or read about him in other fics, I automatically assume he is gay, not bisexual, queer etc etc. I think the fact that this is what you think as well really helps enforce what you were going for.

Hah I'm glad you feel accomplished, but I really hope you continue this and maybe make it a little happier (not that I mind the angsty sadness mind you) :)

[believethis6]

If I find some time to continue it, I guarantee that it will get happier (although it may take a lot more angst and sadness to get there). I just have no idea what to go with next here... /frustrated/

Yeah. Karofsky is gay, no lie. ;)