Here's some pictures from my latest shoot with Dmitri and Desiree... mostly of Dmitri though... but as far as I'm concerned... good fucking shit. tell me what you think...
Oki I'll just comment on the ones that stood out to me.
#1: Like the lights, but I wish it was a macroshot of her eyes -- Looks like the lights are making some funky effecys with her eyes.
#2: Best shot in the series. She looks so natural sitting there, smoking her cig; the composition is great, a professional-grade picture.
The rest, not as interesting. The girl is pretty, don't get me wrong, but they're just not interesting shots. However, the *very first* picture with her staring into the mirror has promise. Make the backgrounds consistent; the multitude of colors and fabrics really detracts from the picture. Since the shot is dark already I'd go with a medium-dark background and make the full shot completely dark, only dodging her face a few stops to have focus stay on her.
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Oki I'll just comment on the ones that stood out to me.
#1: Like the lights, but I wish it was a macroshot of her eyes -- Looks like the lights are making some funky effecys with her eyes.
#2: Best shot in the series. She looks so natural sitting there, smoking her cig; the composition is great, a professional-grade picture.
The rest, not as interesting. The girl is pretty, don't get me wrong, but they're just not interesting shots. However, the *very first* picture with her staring into the mirror has promise. Make the backgrounds consistent; the multitude of colors and fabrics really detracts from the picture. Since the shot is dark already I'd go with a medium-dark background and make the full shot completely dark, only dodging her face a few stops to have focus stay on her.
Just my opinion of course. :)
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