WC: Need - Part 3: Food

Jul 21, 2012 12:35


White Collar -- Fanfiction

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Title:  Need (Part 3 - Food)
  • Rating: R
  • Warnings:  Language, Violence, Sexual References, PTSD
  • Spoilers:  none
  • Category: Hurt/Comfort, Drama, Nudity, Peter-Neal-Elizabeth Friendship
Summary:

Neal surrenders to ( Read more... )

hurt/comfort, peter neal friendship, drama, white collar

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Comments 11

kanarek13 July 21 2012, 17:15:37 UTC
Aww, thank you so much for a quick update. Another heartbreaking chapter. At this point I have no idea how they're gonna come back from this. But at the same time I just know that if there's anyone who can bring Neal back, it's Peter and El. So gripping, so well-written, just WOW! Thank you!

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bella_harvest July 21 2012, 17:22:37 UTC
Thanks so much. Well, we know how Peter's "magic touch" brought Neal back from the dead in Hard Sell! (Who taught that man CPR??? Is a little mouth-to-mouth too much to ask???) But I digress ;) Glad you're still on board.

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robingal1 July 21 2012, 20:26:15 UTC
I love everything about this!
I'm not even past chapter one and i'm completely hooked. now, here we are at chapter three and i find myself clicking the "refresh" button, thinking that something is clearly wrong with the page loading... after all, IT CAN'T END LIKE THAT, can it?
I love this so much; i'm on the edge of my seat!

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bella_harvest July 21 2012, 20:56:26 UTC
Rest assured that it's not going to end like this and that I'm not drawing out the posting to torture anybody (Well, except for poor Neal. Obviously). Work is pretty crazy right now and squeezing in a little time here and there to get the next few pages out is my own personal treat (and therapy). So, stay tuned, and thank you very much for reading a commenting.

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droodlebug July 21 2012, 20:59:45 UTC
This gets better and better with each installment! You've set it up very nicely with Neal starting to cling to El but still wary of Peter. It will be all the sweeter when he finally turns to Peter for comfort, but I hope that is a long way off with many angst-filled chapters in between!

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bella_harvest July 21 2012, 21:13:41 UTC
I know we're miles away from any canon, but IMO Neal has always had an easier time trusting and ingratiating himself with the women in his life. His nearly immediate attachment to El felt like the most likely option under the circumstances. Plus, it made me all warm and fuzzy to think about because it's simply super-cute ;)

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droodlebug July 22 2012, 00:38:59 UTC
Who cares about canon!? LOL I'm up for any situation that leads to tears and cuddles and I agree with you on the super-cuteness of his attachment to El. Keep it coming, please!

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x_varda_x July 21 2012, 21:23:27 UTC
I really like this and look forward to further instalments :D

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bella_harvest July 21 2012, 21:36:50 UTC
Thank you. I'll do my best to get the next part up soon.

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winterstar95 July 21 2012, 23:53:08 UTC
Please do your bestest best to put the next part up soon. I love how you've framed this and I love Neal's absolute terror but that he's still able to figure things out and 'act' like you would think Neal would -- to plan escape! Perfection!

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bella_harvest July 22 2012, 00:24:02 UTC
I will, I will. I'm putting the finishing touches on the next part. And I swear picking a dress for a first date is easier than deciding on the perfect picture! Arrrgh.

Glad you're enjoying it so far.

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