WC: Need - Part 5: Trust

[bella_harvest]

White Collar -- Fanfiction

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Title:  Need (Part 5 - Trust)

• Rating: R
• Warnings:  Language, Violence, Sexual References, PTSD
• Spoilers:  none
• Category: Hurt/Comfort, Drama, Nudity, Peter-Neal-Elizabeth Friendship

Summary:

Although Neal is on

Comments

[fab50s]

I think your right it will take a long time for Neal to get over what happened to him and it wouldn't be right to make it seem he recovered just because of a little TLC from El and Peter. You probably have it figured out in your head where you want to take it. I would think that El and Peter will get him ready enough to face the journey back to New York where he would need a lot more treatment physically and mentally. I would love a postscript or epilogue set some months in the future where Neal has recovered as much as he is going to. Sorry don't want to interfere your stories are all amazing.

[bella_harvest]

You're not interfering. I think it's great that you're really into the story! Geeze, I better not be disappointing ;) (I am always *very* disappointed when I have high hopes for a Collar episode and it's doesn't end up what I wanted it to be). I'm hoping to leave the story on a hopeful note, and then we'll see about an epilogue...

[fab50s]

Hopeful ending sounds great. I haven't been disappointed by one of your stories yet.
When do you think you'll finish it no pressure but it was painful waiting for chapter 5 this week.

[bella_harvest]

I have several pages finished but there's a long list of notes and ideas for several more pages. I am working both days this weekend (which is where I am now) but thanks to my complete lack of a social life, I should have time to write at night. On a good day I can write a few pages in one sitting, but on a bad day I can't get through a paragraph. So, the answer is: IDK. Maybe by Monday if things go well, but I don't want to make promises. Really sorry.

[fab50s]

Don't apologise I'm on holidays for the months of July and August (I work in a school in Ireland and it's our summer holidays). I have nothing to do I'm on a small island off the west coast and am reading voraciously. I have read all three Fifty Shades books and the latest Karen Slaughter and have just started a John Grisham novel. I am also haunting the WC fanfiction thread. I have nothing to do and all day to do it.

[bella_harvest]

Arrgh. Now I'm jealous. I haven't read an actual book in months! Not to mention the awesome long vacation time. I feel guilty when I take a couple of days off for the occasional weekend escape to NYC. But I'm almost done for today and then it's back to do some writing. Yay.

[lov_pb]

Read all five chapters in one sitting. Once I began reading I couldn't stop. Vivid word images, emotionally wrenching. Beautifully written. Love it.

[bella_harvest]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read all that! I'm very happy to hear that you like the story so far.

[micheleeeex]

Great chapter!!

[bella_harvest]

Thank you. Working hard on the next part...