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Fic: "A Safe Place" (Prison Break, M/S)

Nov 24, 2006 12:08

“A Safe Place”
By: Bella Lumina
Fandom/Pairing: Prison Break, Michael/Sara
Rating: PG-13
Canon: Up to and including “212: Disconnect”
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit gained.
Summary: "You’ll have to pardon me if I don’t really trust anybody at the moment."

( When she hears the knock at the door of the hotel room, she sucks in a deep breath... )

prison break, michael/sara, fic

Comments 25

eilan November 24 2006, 23:18:04 UTC

I gotta say, I enjoyed reading that incredibly!

Awesome job, mind if I friend you??

(I agree with an earlier comment, I don't want to miss out on any of it!)

bellalumina November 25 2006, 03:45:36 UTC

Sure, feel free to friend away! I always post new stuff here first, and most of my fandom thoughts go here, too.

I'm glad it was an enjoyable read!

jjoe November 25 2006, 02:27:34 UTC

Wow, this is incredibly well written and very true to what I think the emotional aftermath will be for Sara. And I loved Michael in this. So hot and bothered being so close to a naked Sara, yet still being very much in protector mode. I would love to see a continuation or a sequel to this, but if not I will be sure to keep an eye out for your future fics.

Great job! :-)

bellalumina November 25 2006, 03:46:50 UTC

Thanks! Michael was definitely the most fun part of writing this; I knew how Sara would react, but it's so fun playing with Michael's control. Putting him in various situations and imagining how he would react is just too amusing, and I'm glad that this reaction seemed true to his character!

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bellalumina November 26 2006, 05:23:17 UTC

Wow, thank you! It's so amazing to hear that the story stayed with you like that!

Also, hello back -- yes, I was in the GG fandom back in the day (season two), and I wrote a couple of Rory/Jess stories. I think I remember your name, too -- you were also an R/J fan, if I remember correctly?

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secretagent008 November 26 2006, 05:00:24 UTC

Wow. This is fantastic. It's so well written and your characterisation is spot-on. Great job hon.

If no one already has, I'm going to rec this over at TWoP, if you don't mind.

bellalumina November 26 2006, 05:24:14 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story so much. I don't mind if you rec it, in fact, I'm incredibly flattered!

secretagent008 November 26 2006, 06:02:08 UTC

Done! It really is a great fic, hon. You should be very proud of it.

bellalumina November 26 2006, 16:35:34 UTC

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback. My muse loves it. :)

msgenevieve November 26 2006, 06:24:03 UTC

This is wonderful. They're so messed up and just so drawn to each other and you showed that perfectly. Just like canon, Michael is the one with his heart on his sleeve and Sara is the one resisting the inevitable, but she just can't stop herself reaching out to him. Lovely!

bellalumina November 26 2006, 16:37:11 UTC

Thanks, Gen! I'm so glad it felt true to canon; I was really striving for that connection with their established characters, and it's awesome to hear that it worked!