Fic: Say When (J/J, NC-17) 2/4

Jul 05, 2011 14:29



Chapter Two ~ Give me the squeal of tyres.

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capra_maritimus July 6 2011, 04:02:51 UTC
*thud*

If you write a part three to this I don't think I'll survive the resulting conflagration. Wow.

Yeah, confident!James does it for me, for sure. :D

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bellap74 July 9 2011, 11:26:20 UTC
I'm so late in replying to comments - argh!

Thanks for reading - really glad you enjoyed it. I do love a confident James, he's quite mesmerizing when he knows his stuff ;)

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random_yayness July 6 2011, 09:03:16 UTC
ihdfoishf;oish;oiauhgois;hg;lzkjfd oh my god, this is just getting more and more amazing. I'm with marginaliana, "My tongue can be such a wet tricky whore" is one of the hottest fucking things I've ever read, seriously. And the writing on the script and notes, James, I AM IMPRESSED with your bravery. Nnnngguh. And he made them rhyme just for Jez. *giggles*

Can. Not. Wait. For. More. *dying*

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bellap74 July 9 2011, 11:29:59 UTC
I get to bombard YOU with comments for a change as I go through and reply to things XD

Thanks for reading *squish* and I'm really glad part 2 worked for you - James IS a bit brave/reckless writing Jeremy notes and on his script but he's horny and he's confident that he's read Jeremy right. He also wants the chance to use that wet, tricky whore of a tongue....

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alisso July 6 2011, 11:55:51 UTC
There's something particularly amazing about the sneaky porny poetry, passing notes in class, as it were. Right under the headmaster's nose, too *g* Poor Jez, getting all worked up at work!

And I love the interesting power balance between them here. On the one hand, James is tormenting Jeremy in a wonderful way, teasing and in control, but at the same time, he's laying himself on the line, here. Jeremy could turn around and crush him. It all just adds to the tension that this fic is practically vibrating with *g*

I can't wait for the rest...I'm really curious about what they got up to that this needs two more parts! *g*

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bellap74 July 9 2011, 11:34:00 UTC
*hugs*

Comments running SO late XD
Thanks for reading part 2 hun and I'm really glad you liked it. I think the power balance between any of the boys and Jeremy is one of the things that really interests me in TG slash. Jeremy's more senior in many ways and it's 'his' show but R & Ja outshine him in certain areas and he clearly admires that - if sometimes begrudgingly XD

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