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bellataggart

After All This Time... (5/?)

Jan 10, 2009 23:04

After All This Time

By Bella Taggart

Part 5/?

Erica took the stand and shook Richard’s hand.

“Thank you Richard.”

After he moved away, leaving her alone in the center of everyone’s attention, she turned towards the crowd, took a deep breath and standing still, slowly looked around. There was absolute silence in the room ( Read more... )

grey's anatomy, erica hahn, after all this time, callica, callie torres, fanfiction, bella taggart, fanfic

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bellataggart January 15 2009, 23:06:13 UTC

Thank you! if you wanna see what happens, i have aiready posted the next part, fyi :)

iluvcallie January 11 2009, 08:32:28 UTC

I just found this story and I'm hooked. You write Callie very well. It's 230 am and I'm so excited to see what's to come. Callie's reaction to seeing Erica (both times) was perfect! I could see her trying to be cool, but not, but then cool again and then running away and losing it. And then Erica becoming Chief, AWESOME! Oooohhh, this is going to be good. Sorry for rambling but I'm really enjoying this.

bellataggart January 15 2009, 23:11:16 UTC

Thank you so much. i love long comments, please dont apologise for that,
Feel free to ramble any time :)

And wellcome to the world of After All This Time, hope you stick around for the next parts... Talking about that, the next part is up, if you wanna see how they react when they see each other, its gonna be a little different this time :)

spotlesssky January 11 2009, 10:18:34 UTC

Really love the way that Callie seems to be in her denial. The speech of Erica is great too, the underlying warning between her words is so much her character!

Waiting anxiously for another update! More please!!

bellataggart January 15 2009, 23:12:43 UTC

Thank you so much. İ thought she'd be one to subtly threaten and motivate at the same time so thats how it came out. :)
The next part is up fyi...

hot_4_hahn January 11 2009, 14:07:56 UTC

This installment was great. Your dialogue for Erica is succinct and real. And I love how Callie is torn. She was just barely beginning to get over her, and now the band-aid has been ripped off.

I’m really excited to see where your vision is going to take this story. I love it!

bellataggart January 15 2009, 23:14:06 UTC

Exactly! The band-aid definetely has been ripped off.

Thank you so much for your kind words.

The next part is up by the way :)

sapphicwarrior January 11 2009, 18:35:18 UTC

this was an awesome update again! I loved Erica's speech and Cristina was great too.
Can't wait to read more :)

bellataggart January 15 2009, 23:14:50 UTC

Thanks so much! The next part is up fyi... :)