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larry200 March 24 2009, 17:07:43 UTC
OMG! This chapter was so worth the wait. Love Erica's shyness when she tried asking Callie out for drinks and the timing of Jane? Totally priceless. Can't wait to read more and hope you don't mind but I added you on my friends list.

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bellataggart March 30 2009, 08:54:38 UTC
The more friends the merrier :)

And, Thank you very much!

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sapphicwarrior March 24 2009, 17:20:25 UTC
totally love this update :).
Haha and Mark being afraid of the blood sucking out of his vain LOL :). That was funny.
Loved how Erica and Callie are getting closer, till Jane interrupted them... One step forward and two steps back.
Looking forward to read more :)

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bellataggart March 30 2009, 09:00:32 UTC
:) That part was pretty funny in my head, and i was wondering if it had gotten lost in translation. So thanks for letting me know that it was ok.

its all about the ones step forward, two steps back. But i do believe they are gonna walk, if not run a few steps in the next chapter. (which should be up very soon, like in a day or two max.)

Thanks again!
:)

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melificent811 March 24 2009, 17:41:54 UTC
ACK! So much pulling and tugging of my heart strings. That single touch on Callie's shoulder was enough to make MY heart jump. I can completely imagine it happening... The intensity of their little shared moment.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

BRAVO!

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bellataggart March 30 2009, 09:02:05 UTC
Thank you! Really.
More to come just as soon as i hear back from my beta. :)

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bellataggart March 30 2009, 09:08:27 UTC
Thank you! Thank you so much :)

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novak_benson March 24 2009, 21:05:40 UTC
Great story. More…now! :D

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bellataggart March 30 2009, 09:08:55 UTC
Thank you :) More on the way...

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