But Deadly 'verse 3: Silent Water (1/1)

[bellatemple]

Title: Silent Water
Author: Bella Temple
Category: SPN, AU, Gen, drama
Rating: Teen
Warnings: AU, some language
Spoilers: "Dead in the Water"
Characters: Sam, Dean, Andrea and Lucas Barr, OFC
Disclaimer: The characters and basic premise within are property of Warner Bros, Eric Kripke, etc. No money is being made off this work of fiction.
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[ifyouweremine]

What an awesome new chapter! I just found out there was a second story in this verse a little while ago on spnstoryfinders, and right after I finished that this chapter popped up, so I was pretty excited!

Wow, I just love how you've stayed so true to canon, to the boys' characterizations and the storyline, but meshed it with these new circumstances, with these changes. These stories are such a pleasure to read, and I could really see these things happening--I could believe that the characters I know from canon would do these things and act this way had they grown up in different circumstances.

Lovely job! <333

[bellatemple]

Thank you! Keeping them true to canon despite my changes has always been my number one priority.

And, yeah, that post on spnstoryfinders sorta kicked my butt into gear about getting this story finished. Glad you liked it!

[bellatemple]

Thank you! I'm rather fond of you at the moment, too. ;D

[jillybean_6939]

OMG I like this verse sooo much!! I can't believe I've read the first part so many times but I just found out about the sequels *fails*.

Thanks for writing these! You're amazing!

[bellatemple]

I should really get around to linking the sequels on that first story. . . .

Glad you're enjoying it!

[bellatemple]

Thank you.

[iniq]

Whoo!
I'm the same as ifyouweremine - I found out about the second story through the storyfinders comm and put a track tag on your tag. *g*
I love this verse so much, I have no words. Which is probably why I was so lazy with the last one. I'll reply twice as enthusiastically now to make up for it. I love it~
One should give detailed feedback, I know, but I can't possibly pick something that was especially awesome, as it was all so good. *g* Let's see... the fact that Andrea doesn't want her son to grow up like Dean at first. I really liked that bit. And, of course, how she changes her mind and includes the leather jacket as something she would approve of. :D

[bellatemple]

Thanks! And, hey, I'll take whatever feedback people want to give.

And thank you. Andrea's attitude towards Dean was especially interesting for me to develop. I'm glad it rings true.