that fragile capricorn

Apr 13, 2008 23:32

Title: dancing fancy pirouettes
Pairings: Jon/Spencer, Pete/Ashlee, squint and you'll miss it Joe/Tom and Brendon/Greta
Rating: vanilla all the way.
Word Count: 4909
Summary: On the day of the first ever Decaydance Elementary School dance, Jon Walker arrives at school and notices one of his fourth graders, Ashlee Simpson, holding court in the ( Read more... )

bandom, fic, i should be sleeping

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honeybearbee April 13 2008, 18:41:53 UTC
♥ This is so adorable.

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belle_bing April 13 2008, 23:36:04 UTC
Much like your icon! Thanks for reading.

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honeybearbee April 14 2008, 02:27:29 UTC
Andy/Joe and their own puppy is never not cute!

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belle_bing April 14 2008, 12:35:39 UTC
THIS IS TRUE!

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blossyn April 13 2008, 19:43:54 UTC
oh, I loved this a whole lot! Spencer giving Jon the rosettes from the cake and stealing the M&Ms! Baby Brendon yelling at Ryan to dance with him next, Queen Bee Ashlee!

I could list the awesome things about this fic for hours but really, it made me smile and smile and smile and I love the way you write.

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belle_bing April 13 2008, 23:37:07 UTC
Aww, thank you so much!

When I wrote it, I was really worried about my Greta!voice and the way I changed between the two POVs, so I am glad you like it.

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blossyn April 14 2008, 01:52:13 UTC
oh no, I really liked the way you switched pov's between the kids and adults! It worked very well.

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belle_bing April 14 2008, 12:32:12 UTC
Thanks so much! I actually started writing the sequel today (because it seeded in my head as I was writing this one) which also does the POV change, but it is only between two students, so I am keeping my fingers crossed that it works.

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chaosy April 13 2008, 20:35:11 UTC
♥.♥

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belle_bing April 13 2008, 23:37:22 UTC
:D Thanks!

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heartequals April 13 2008, 23:48:45 UTC
Awww, oh gosh. I don't even know who's cuter and more ridiculous in this story, the teachers or the kids!

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belle_bing April 13 2008, 23:51:31 UTC
Ahahahahaha, if you want ridiculous, definitely the teachers!

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holycloud April 14 2008, 03:36:26 UTC
"RYAN, WHEN YOU'RE FINISHED DANCING WITH KELTIE, CAN YOU DANCE WITH ME?"

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!

Loved it!

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belle_bing April 14 2008, 12:38:26 UTC
(And even though Ryan scowls, he totally does, the second slow dance is all Brendon's. Mostly because Ryan doesn't want Brendon slow dancing with Shane twice.)

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holycloud April 14 2008, 21:36:52 UTC
YEAH!!!!!!! Glad to hear that!!!

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belle_bing April 15 2008, 11:10:27 UTC
:D

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