Okay, now I'm through with the prologue I'm ready for next part. :) Kidding! Take your time. *hugs* Sounds like an interesting story... especially because I don't know the musical. So I'm even more intrigued.
thank you :) i am so so glad you like it *hugs* and the story more or less takes of where the musical ended ;) but i will upload a soundtrack tonight or so also with a few videos from scenes in the musical that the characters will remember here...
interesting start! i might have preferred a more detailed premise, to get better grasp of Sean's charcter at least, but i guess you gave priority to his and Orlando's story. and i'm looking forward to more
and yes, their story is the priority and i don't think giving a character away in the prologue already works out too well. i kinda enjoy to discover new sides of them during the story and i hope my readers do too :)
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Intriguing start, sweetie, I'll be back for more. :)
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and no, sarah is no good...she'll cause quite some trouble i fear ;)
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and yes, their story is the priority and i don't think giving a character away in the prologue already works out too well. i kinda enjoy to discover new sides of them during the story and i hope my readers do too :)
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Lovely start.
thanks
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